
just to remind me to use the right grammar - I'll update my script...
INT.introduction.STUDENTS ROOM.AFTERNOON
A human being (me) sits at his desk working. The camera slips into his his head either through a ear, the nose or an eye.
CGi.the buzzcat.INSIDE THE HEAD
Wide shots of the landscape to introduce the plot.
Close of the cats weaving paws and a purring sound over two ends of synapses. He is stimulating them to create thoughts. Small electric jolts emit from the synapses back to the cat who is aware of its danger.
The cat jumps around, is excited and astonished about the processes going on in the brain. He likes his work. Several close shots of the cat. (head, tail, blinking eyes a.s.o.)
INT.Cat in the eye.STUDENTS ROOM.AFTERNOON
black
the eyelid opens
In a very close shot of an eye the cat can be seen in the reflection of a pupil.
(later on ev. an other shot with fish and cat in comic like chase with two eyes)
the eyelid closes
black
CGi.the problem.INSIDE THE HEAD
Suddenly something goes wrong. The firing of the synapses reduces dramatically so the former electric storm is down to a minimum. The Audience gets glimpses of parts of SillyBillyFish who turns synapses of with his lantern. The sound changes to a threatening humming combined with the sound of electronic power switched off.
The Buzzcat gets irritated and sets up to locate the source of this incident.
INT.knock out.STUDENTS ROOM.AFTERNOON
A daized and confused person still sitting on a chair in front of a laptop slightly swinging from one side to an other. It isn't capable of doing anything.
CGi.the hunt.INSIDE THE HEAD
(short fast moving takes. Those of the cat bright and shiny and those of the fish dark and threatening)
The Buzzcat hunts the fish of whom only glimpses can be seen. The two of them are never in the same picture. As the hunt goes on they pass a dark tunnel down into the deeper areas of the brain.
(find metaphor for deeper brain to help visualising)
The fish slips with a deep blowwwwph soung through a barrier in to his lair. The cat stops worried in front of the barrier.
CGI.the metaphysical cat.INSIDE THE HEAD
The buzzcat overthrows (transcends) the barrier by moving his paws and rotating like a twister, so he becomes after the whirling a transparent cat that reflects the rainbowcolors. Like this the cat can slip through the mental cellular wall.
A black wall remains, or alternatively the camera folows the cat through the barrier.
CGI.the lair of sillybilly.INSIDE THE HEAD
Now the Buzzcat is inside the hiding place of SillyBilly. For the first time the fish can be seen in total. He is floating in the space.
(first a close up of the fish, then the camera moves backwards tho show the cat and the fish on opposite sides of the picture)
The cat growls, hisses and spits at the fish. The fish answers with a deep tone that sounds chuntering, droning and humming. Both of them move in the beginning only slightly but more and more faster while the sound gains volume and around the cat buzzing starts.
Finally the fish gets thrown (ev. without being touched) between two synapses endings and stays stocked there.
The Buzzcat approaches while gesticulating with its paws and grinning madly. The synapses enlighten and fire a thought so that the fish explodes into thousands of pieces.
int.the end.STUDENTS ROOM.night
The human being awakes from his paralysed state, shakes his head and blows his nose. The remainings of the fish are flushed out of the brain. The Buzzcat glimpses triumphantly up in one eye.
CGI.the problem.INSIDE THE HEAD
Suddenly something goes wrong. The firing of the synapses reduces dramatically so the former electric storm is down to a minimum. The Audience gets glimpses of parts of SillyBillyFish who turns synapses of with his lantern. The sound changes to a threatening humming combined with the sound of electronic power switched off.
The Buzzcat gets irritated and sets up to locate the source of this incident.
INT.knock out.STUDENTS ROOM.AFTERNOON
A daized and confused person still sitting on a chair in front of a laptop slightly swinging from one side to an other. It isn't capable of doing anything.
CGI.the hunt.INSIDE THE HEAD
(short fast moving takes. Those of the cat bright and shiny and those of the fish dark and threatening)
The Buzzcat hunts the fish of whom only glimpses can be seen. The two of them are never in the same picture. As the hunt goes on they pass a dark tunnel down into the deeper areas of the brain.
(find metaphor for deeper brain to help visualising)
The fish slips with a deep blowwwwph soung through a barrier in to his lair. The cat stops worried in front of the barrier.
Parts Of My Brain
Story Outline
Draft 1
14/2/08
thomASKunz
STUDENTS ROOM 1
(live action footage)
A human being (me) sits at his desk working. The camera slips into his his head either through a ear, the nose or an eye.
INSIDE THE HEAD 1
(CGI 3D footage)
Just inside the skull the buzzcat is active. Actually the cat is visible through the eyes of the human being from the outside world but not every time and only if he wants to.
Buzzcat is excited and astonished about the proccesses going on in the brain even though he lives there since he started living. It's good never to lose the ability to get astonished. So as more active the brain is and as more the synapsis are fireing/ buzzing because of the thoughts passing as more the cat likes the landscape or should it be called brainscape ;-)
INSIDE THE HEAD 2
(CGI 3D footage)
Suddenly something goes wrong. The fireing of the synapsis reduces dramatically so the former electric storm is reduced to a minimum. Only occasionally a flash lighting up. The Buzzcat decides to set up to locate the source of this incident.
STUDENTS ROOM 2
(live action footage)
A daized and confused person still sitting on a chair in front of a Laptop slightly swinging from one side to an other. It isn't capable to do anything.
INSIDE THE HEAD 3
(CGI 3D footage)
The Buzzcat is wandering around still in search of the problems source. Where ever he crosses the synapses fire a little bit because of the cats stimulation. As the cat passes a dark tunnel downwards to the inner regions he finds himself near the deeply hidden areas of the subconscious mind. Actually this isn't a physically locatable region, it lies in the metaphysical parts of the brain. As the Buzzcat isn't a physical cat either he can reach every region imaginable. Here the incident of the lower synapsis activity seems to has it's source because as the cat approaches the region no fireing at all starts.
INSIDE THE HEAD 4
(CGI 3D footage)
The Buzzcat slips through the cellular wall and faces a quite huge latern fish who claims to be SillyBilly and has arrived just some years ago as a little grain of some seed. The fish prefers a low level of brain activity and tries to catch with his forehead latern precious thoughts to destroy and devour them.
A confrontation between them is inevitable.
INSIDE THE HEAD 5
(CGI 3D footage)
The Buzzcat and SillyBilly fight against each other. In the end of the fight the fish is thrown away and gets stuck between two ends of some synapses. As they fire for a new thought, the fish explodes in to thousands of pieces.
STUDENTS ROOM 3
(live action footage)
The human being awakes from his stand down status, shakes his head and blows his nose. The remainings of the fish are flushed out of the brain and the subconscious mind is free at last.